It took me a while to get Panel 3. At first i read it like an explosion or a machine gun noise (thus, the rest of the Quadapus is now in pieces!). I’m guessing ignoring over the ‘R’ had something to do with it. Maybe if you made it larger in relation to the ‘B’?
I thought about just using “burp”, but, well…didn’t. Don’t have a really good reason for it.
I like to drink bubble juice fruit at work, but my co-workers don’t enjoy it so much 😀
They don’t know what’s good for ’em.
You should them a good old bottle of frobscottle
I had to look up frobscottle. It took me a while to discover what it was (I’m not familiar with the Roald Dahl book The Big Friendly Giant). Apparently you can make your own with green Hawaiian Punch and A&W Cream Soda. Maybe someone can develop a homemade version of Bubble Juice Fruit, but I can’t imagine anyone wanting to drink something that tastes like chocolate brownies and cat barf.
Well…better to come out the front door, so to speak.
I like “BRAAP!” Didn’t think it was a burp. It’s funny either way and best left to the reader.
Great expression in panel 2 and Jeff’s in 4. Funny stuff!
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