Ch-ch-ch-changes…
After taking a look at Monday’s installment and deciding it just wasn’t getting the idea across, I made some tweaks in the art and dialog. I think it works a little better this way. But here’s the older version just in case you’re feeling nostalgic:
*grumble* The old one felt more like Ellie. The new one is quite a bit too obvious. *complaining* :-/
Thanks Rob. I understand. And I didn’t just make the change on a whim – it bothered me from the start. I hope I don’t feel the need to do that again. I honestly appreciate your grumbling and complaining though. It lets me know that people care.
I gotta agree with Rob. It took me a little bit to “get” the original, but when I did, it was *really* funny and “in character”. The new one is clear, but flat.
Thanks for the comment Jon. It was that taking a little bit to get it that’s the killer though.
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I have to say, the dialogue in this one sounds more natural.
Thanks, Aononymoose.